Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Twenty Four

Write about 24......

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  1. 24
    Challenge 24
    2 dozen
    A month minus 5 (leap year), 6 or 7 days
    Television show
    12+12
    6 times 4
    The 24 of some months is somebody's birthday
    The 24 of some months is some bodies anniversary
    The 24 of some month somebody died

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  2. 24; only identifiable to a stranger like her by the faded, numbered jersey he is wearing. As she sees him her mind loses focus. Colors and sounds blur into meaningless sensations. All she knows is 24. His blue eyes, always distracted as they are now. Just as hers are now; she can't see anything else but him. She tries...no use. 24 has her captivated. He's nonchalant, almost unaware of the world around him. Surprise illuminates his face whenever his attention is grasped. A pink flush graces her cheeks as his blue eyes pass over her. He does not see her, he does not really see much of anything. His hand brushes through his messy, brown hair; a casual act that has become his habit. He continues to glance around, bored of his mediocre company. Then their eyes lock. Her mouth forms an O as his eyebrows shoot up, but neither of them breaks the connection. 24 takes one hesitant forward, she stands still as if frozen by him. Then her phone goes off and the moment is over. 24 recedes into the crowd. Who was he? She doesn't know, but sometimes it's better not to. That way life can go on, unaffected, as it was before.

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    1. That last line. Oh my gosh. This made me want to cry.

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  3. I'm watching the clock tick by.
    6:21
    I'm rubbing away the remnants of a restless sleep from my blurry eyes.
    And now it's 6:24, and I really can't focus.
    How did that happened?
    I ask this everyday as I am increasingly stunned at the speed at which time seems to pass. The way an entire day can be surrendered to procrastination or...
    I couldn't think of another word.
    And now it's 6:50.
    We only have 24 hours in a day. 24 hours to fill with moments of deep breaths, innovative thoughts, companionship...
    I shouldn't have taken that nap. What good has that done?
    I should have read something. Thought something. Worked a little harder at being something. Because we only have 24 hours in a day, and I find that I am continually haunted by phantoms who present me with a life that threatens to yield nothing more than ordinariness.
    6:58 and I told someone I loved them.
    And I feel a little better.
    Because a life where I can really feel every second, minute and hour, is one that does not scare me at all.
    There are only 24 hours in a day, and I am determined to live for every single one.

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  4. Twenty four hours
    In a day
    Giving me 1,440 seconds
    Before I fall into a trap
    That I won't be able to escape
    Every day the same
    Repeating the cycle
    Crying, feeling, screaming
    But I can't ever seem to remember
    The day I spent with you
    If only one day sooner
    For everything
    Everyday wasted on me
    Caring to much abut how I feel
    But what about them?
    Crazy amounts of energy spent on me
    All to fall off the ends of the Earth
    But Earth is round
    And there are only twenty four hours in a day
    Giving you 1,440 seconds to worry abut me

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    1. Love the whole thing but those last three lines are chill-worthy

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    2. To fall off the ends of the earth, but the earth is round. Sounds like a conversation we had today! But seriously. This is perfect.

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  5. Can you find TWENTY FOUR?

    Time of the day
    When I want to purchase a house
    Eight devisors
    Number
    Television series
    Young and aspiring

    Four times six
    Order of priests in Bible
    Under twenty-five
    Really? This blog was challenging. Haha!

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  6. Two times twelve
    Whole day in hours
    Eggs in two cartons
    Number of choice
    Two square roots of six
    Year of maturity says my parents

    Fame as Christmas Eve
    Or my uncles birthday
    Universal time zone maximum
    Ruling of Irish thumbs

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  7. 11:24
    I am plunged into consciousness.
    59
    My entire physical being is overcome by agony.
    54
    I attempt to shift my body. I am numb.
    48
    It will all be over in a minute.
    42
    Robbed of everything I am by an intoxicated fool.
    39
    My mind replays visions of the deplorable wreckage.
    34
    The sobs of my loved ones haunt me.
    30
    If I could only quell their mourning.
    24
    It will all be over in a minute.
    18
    Past memories rush through me like bittersweet streams.
    13
    There was so much I wanted to accomplish.
    9
    My ambitions and dreams shatter like glass before me.
    7
    I didn't ask for this.
    5
    But it will all be over in a minute.
    4
    I feel the pain begin to release me now.
    3
    My thoughts now are fading.
    2
    It's all black.
    1
    It's all over.
    11:25

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  8. 24
    He said it was only an age
    I'm only 16
    He's so much older
    All the peer pressure
    So little to choose from in this cold world
    Her parents are fighting
    Everyone in an uproar
    It was either him or the family
    Days go by
    Weeks go by
    One final decision
    She left
    Everything's gone but her and him
    24 was the age

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  9. The hours you've lived
    The places you've been
    The dreams you've had
    They do not define you
    You cannot define you
    You don't see your smile
    When caught off guard
    You don't see your lingering stare
    While your mind wanders
    You cannot see you
    I cannot define you
    I can only say what I see
    And all I see is you
    The sparkle in your eye
    When passion mixes with pleasure
    I can only hope
    To see all of you

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  10. 24 hours in a day.
    24 hours in which anything could happen.
    24 hours that could change your life.
    24 hours for you to make your dreams your reality.
    24 chances to make today your day.

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  11. 24
    Somebody's age
    The number after 23
    The number before 25
    The age you can be in college
    The age you can be married

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